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 Category:  Romance Poetry
  Posted: January 3, 2018      Views: 97

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DR DIP 

writes under the pen name Dip

"Terrible, insipid and snide poems. Rhymes are okay, but are mostly forgettable shrugs of language that work for a time and then are easily forgotten." Also not helped by the curious picture you have selected fo - more...

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Heartbroken
"Promises broken" by DR DIP
PROMISES BROKEN

Promises broken, no compromise
Heartache always follows
I see that sadness in your eyes
Can see now why one wallows

In a relationship so uncertain
Where do we go from here?
Is this really love's final curtain?
Please make this perfectly clear

Promises broken, you promised the world
Left me with a broken heart
Why are your feelings so withheld?
How can I be a part?

Part of a love that could be forever
But that was only before
Thought you wanted to be together
But those promises are no more

Promises are no more it seems
You've taken them away
Taken away all my dreams
Nothing more I need to say

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When you promise your love forever, when you say it is for keeps and you break those promises. its very hard to take

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