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 Category:  Biographical Poetry
  Posted: April 15, 2018      Views: 102

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rhyming couplets
"Was I Too Late" by Jim Lorson Sr

I failed to see
what you meant to me

When I turned around, you weren't there
the note you left said, I will always care

I then knew what I had to do
was to go and find you

With finding you, I absolutely knew
I was madly and deeply in love with you

I promise to never again let you get away
as I will cherish and love you everyday

Author Notes
Just thoughts about a woman I loved a long time ago and I let her get away. Never did I find her, but if I did this little poem tells the reader what I would have done if in fact I would have her!!
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