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 Category:  Self Improvement Poetry
  Posted: June 30, 2018      Views: 266
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RICKY1024 
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"It has been a long Journey with many difficulties...
"Losses, Depressions, and other Abnormalities."
"Come with me and watch as I grow and share with you!"
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Chapter 41 of the book "The Gift of Life II"
My thoughts on the Ultimate Gift.
"The Valley of the Dolls" by Ricky1024
"The Valley of the Dolls"
Written on June 30th, 2018
By Doctor Ricky 1024
***<><><><>***<><><><>***
"There's a place, you should know, where people wait, and people go."
"And, in this place, there's a Wizard like Oz, called...
"The Valley of the Dolls."
...
"Meet Kimmie Haines, she's been here from the start?"
"Still waiting to replace, her Broken Heart."
"And, over there all alone in that chair, is Katey."
"Still waiting for that Donation, in the form of a 'Human Kidney?'
"And, what about Pete?"
"Yes, let's meet Pete!"
"But, we better wait a bit cause, he's asleep?"
"And, we keep him well covered, the Wizard and Me...
"So, he doesn't get a Shiver!"
"As he awaits for a replacement of A Liver."

****

"And, what about Me?"
"Yes, I'm a patient too!"
"My kidneys work fine and my Heart goes too!"
"But, my problem is different from them all?"
...
"The first moment that I stepped in this place, I soon realized that all these Dolls, seemed lost and out of place?"
"Some are content and those are the ones that don't have to pay rent!"
"They have Insurance and are way up on, 'The List!'
Ad for me?:
"My employer took it away in 2003!"
...
"So, it's harder for me and as I await...
"My, 'Gift of Life', will probably come to late!"
"You see, for Me, what I so desperately need...
"What's missing for me...
"And, it's not a Heart, Liver, or even a Kidney?"
...
"Yes, my time here is almost over and done."
"And, soon I'll be leaving...
"Without a *Son."
Approximate Word Count: 279.



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Author Notes
*Son:
"My Son that is missing in 'My Doll House of Misery.'
"My Gift of Life that will never, ever come...
Jason Richard Smrkovsky
November 5th, 1984~
March 31st, 2003.
Organs Donated on April 1st, 2003.
(April Fool's Day)
...
"And, to learn more about 'Organ-Tissue Donations.'
"Simply contact my dear friend Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with...
"The Gift of Life Philadelphia Pennsylvania Pennsylvania at 1-800-DONORS-1.
...
"And, thanks from My Doll House and broken Heart and my son Jason's Donated Heart."
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