Contact Us      
         Join today or login
You are using an outdated version. Writing will not be shown properly in many cases. Click here to use the current version.

Status

New Here?
Sign Up
Fast! Three Questions.

Already a member?
Login


Contests


Rank

Poet: None
Author: None
Novel: None
Reviewer:None
Votes: None





 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: August 20, 2019      Views: 208
Chapters:
 ...10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22... 

Print It
Print It
Save to Bookcase
View Reviews
Rate This
Make Reader Pick
Promote This


 ABOUT
RICKY1024 
"I am learning to write."
"It has been a long Journey with many difficulties...
"Losses, Depressions, and other Abnormalities."
"Come with me and watch as I grow and share with you!"
Doctor Ricky 1024.

He is an accomplished novelist and is currently at the #56 spot on the rankings.

Portfolio | Become A Fan
Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of violence.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Chapter 18 of the book Out Standing Stories and Poems
Just a thought of love?
"Within a Heart's Beat 2003" by Ricky1024
"Within a Heart's Beat 2003"
Written on August 20th, 2019
By Doctor Ricky 1024
(A pix challenge to EveLovell)
Copywrite © Fanstory 2019
'All Rights Reserved'

"Time cannot be replaced... "After erased, if you really, really, do *Care?"
(Theology 46.19)

"Eight by Tens"
As he again pretends?
All lined up in a row like little soldiers that he used to know?
My little five soldiers...
And, how I do love them so.
...
One grew up too quick and went to the University,
While the other and only age nineteen?
Gave birth.
What a Victory!
...
Five years would pass and in 2003?
Another to Rutgers University!
But, there are two more?
Two more younger soldiers?
Out the door?
If God, if only I had known?
What exactly what do in 2003?
...
This time can be controlled by Destiny and Fate but what God, what God, about Hate?
Hate that creeps and stalks so deep?
My fourth would leave the house and with the babysitter.
(Dana Alyse)
Neither would attend a College or University?
Why?
...
My son told my daughter Dana...
"You ride with your sister Kyle not with me and Brian Cole!"
States Jay.
Why?
...
"Why Eve Lovell?"
As Destiny, Fate, and now Hate.
Would soon be followed with God's Gentle and Wrapping Embrace...
His arms around my Jay?
That Horrible and Horrid March 31st, Day?
Taking my little boy back home they say...
Approximate Word Count:246.


The book continues with Let the Music Begin?. We will provide a link to it when you review this below.

Author Notes
*Care: adv.
affection, love, heart.
...
"Yes, on March 31st, 2003 at approximately 8 P.M." "My only son Jason would be involved as a passenger...
"In a car driven by a seventeen-year-old maniac...
"Named Brisn Cole."
"And, as sometimes...
Fate and Destiny will do?"
...
"And, at 100 miles an hour into a telephone pole."
"To br pronounced shortly later...
"Brain Dead."
...
"And, to learn more about...
'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
"Just simply contact my dear friend Lara S. Moretti the L.S.W. with...
"The Gift of Life"
Philadelphia Pennsylvania "At 1-800-DONORS-1."
...
"And, thanks for the bottom of my Broken and my Only Son Jason's donated Heart."
...
Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
Fanstory and Tom the Administrator.
Fan Art Review and this talented Artist...
'jgrace.'
And, her Incredible picture entitled...
"Pink Heart"
Jason Richard Smrkovsky
November 5th, 1984~
March 31st, 2003.
Organs graciously offered and accepted on April Fool's Day.
By four greatfull, Human Beings...
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Share or Bookmark
Print It Print It Save to Bookcase View Reviews Make Reader Pick Promote This
© Copyright 2016. Ricky1024 All rights reserved.
Ricky1024 has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.

You need to login or register to write reviews.

It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.

Interested in posting your own writing online? Click here to find out more.



Write a story or poem and submit your work to receive reviews on your writing. Publish short stories on our book writing site and enter the monthly contests. Guaranteed reviews for everything you write and you will be ranked. Information.


  Contact Us

© 2016 FanStory.com, Inc. All Rights Reserved. Terms under which this service is provided to you. Privacy Statement