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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: January 22, 2020      Views: 7

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The battle between good and bad.
"Untold Bliss" by elpsog
Righteous full share is denied, sadly
The cup less than the desire.
It was offered by the evil one, gladly
Weakness sank into the deadly mire.

To often accepted was the sinful deed.
Always the question why the denial?
Inside the covenant is to succeed.
Outside, guilty without trial.

To the question no answer ever given.
Still the urge is strong
But now by God's Grace driven
The sinner suffers the ward off wrong.

Listen! Whatever here you miss
There the Grace filled soul has untold bliss.









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The wise ones go up the others go down.
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