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 Category:  Sports Poetry
  Posted: March 6, 2020      Views: 22

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When I'm having one of those blue days
You're always here to comfort me
I can shed the burdens I carry
And just for a brief moment feel
Ever so carefree

You look deeply into my blue eyes
To see if you really know me
All I can give you is my true self
As complex and mysterious
As I seem to be

When I work online you understand
You take the time to care for me
I've even taken you for granted
I'm lucky you'll fix dinner and
Bring me that green tea

Hope you realize how much I care
Appreciate your time spent with me
It's when you leave for days into weeks
My fluttering heart fears you're lost
Drifting out to sea

Love Poem Poetry Contest contest entry
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