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 Category:  Children Poetry
  Posted: July 7, 2020      Views: 63

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PATCELAW 

I recently moved from Las Cruces, New Mexico to live in Glendale Arizona. I live with my daughter and son-in-law. Since I have vision and health issues, I need to be with family since I can no longer drive.
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She is an accomplished poet and is currently at the #47 spot on this years rankings.

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"Books" by patcelaw
 
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From my days as a little girl
that I would curl upon my bed
a book in my hand to be read
my mom would find me on my bed

there I'd be fast asleep, dreaming
all the words I'd read were teeming.


-Patricia Lawrence
7-7-20

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New format from Dollys Poems.

Pick a subject for the first word which should be one syllable only. Describe your thoughts about the word in four lines using the rhyming format below with internal rhyming. Then the closing couplet should conclude thoughts on the subject. Seven lines, written in iambic tetrameter.

a,
x x x x x x x b
x x x b x x x c
x a x x x x x b
x x x x x x x c

x x x x x x x d
x x x x x x x d
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