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 Category:  General Poetry
  Posted: July 20, 2020      Views: 21

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JUSTIN CHOPIN  

Has gone under the pen name of Boz Roz for about three years on this wonderful website. But since so many people were confusing his name with Bozo the clown he decided that he should just stick with his real name. He has a love of God life art and mu - more...

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Don't drink the Kool- Aid
"I know all of the solutions" by Justin Chopin
I know all of the solutions: Justin Chopin


I know all of the solutions.

To the problems of this world,
And its twenty-first century pollutions.

I know how to make all of you healthy and well.

For I am the only one who can save you from this world,
That is nothing more than a heinous form of hell.


Oh, you should all follow me if you are wise.

Because I have the powers of the Lord Almighty to bring paradise to your eyes.

Yes, travel with me to this New Jerusalem and you will see.

A beautiful way to live with one another as sister and brothers in complete harmony.


Where there is no violence, there's no murder, there's no war,
There's no hate and no problems to make you worry.

But if you desire to sojourn with me then we must hurry.

Come now surely there's one who you who will take my dare.

Just one of you who has the courage to spare.


For the prize you realize is great,
And the prize you must surmise will make you liberated and free.

To live your lives without any rage or strife,
to be happy in God's sweet nation of jubilation and tranquility.

Author Notes
A warning against not believing everything you hear. Especially if the person telling you promising you the joys of a wonderful utopian life is in fact a certifiable lunatic who has no idea what he is talking about and is promising these things outside of the true will of God. The art work I used is of Jim Jones an infamous cult leader and was one of the inspirations for this piece. Hope you enjoy.
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