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 Category:  Spiritual Poetry
  Posted: July 22, 2020      Views: 25

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I recently moved from Las Cruces, New Mexico to live in Glendale Arizona. I live with my daughter and son-in-law. Since I have vision and health issues, I need to be with family since I can no longer drive.
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"Our Hearts He Will Rearrange" by patcelaw


From
the rising
of the sun till setting
of the same, I'll ever praise His name.
Jesus is Lord of all, His law will never change
He comes to us, so our hearts He can
rearrange, by gently
taking the
bad
and
making it
into a gentle heart,
a heart compassionate full of love
for our fellow man, with His mercy from above.
As He is changing our sinful hearts
His wisdom He imparts
making us
good.


-Patricia Lawrence
7-22-20

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Spaceship format is as follows syllable count 1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1 each stanza, centered on the page.
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