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 Category:  General Fiction
  Posted: September 26, 2020      Views: 8

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A contrite Heart
"Sick Inside" by Jeffrey Mitchell



Sick Inside

My heart is under attack, draining. From the love I once felt, tugging emotions, and feelings of emptiness. Aware of my situation and change is inevitable. My heart can heal.

Dealing with a vivid imagination, all because I shared a love with another heart, outside of wedlock.

How is it that I can be so exhilarated about her ? When you knew , she is not right for me, if I knew me like you knew me. That could have made all the difference.

Can her beauty be that intoxicating ?

The idea of wanting to be with her, clouds my judgment.

Because I am not able to see, as you see. My God, her beauty, is a distraction, not allowing me to see that we are not meant to be.

How I justified my actions.

Because she would spend a night or two, Another encounter of her love. What will it take for me to see? Time after time. Choices are from the lust of my flesh....

I never took the time to see her.... or get to know her. I want to find a woman that can kindle my heart. A love that is felt. Not the physical beauty that is seen through the essence of my imagination.

Why does intimacy come before marriage?

Abba, I need to find a way to see your beautiful daughters differently. I am entering the fall season of life, and I don't want to spend winter alone.

I need your help to enlighten me, on how to go about having a meaningful relationship with your daughters. I am asking that you teach me to become a kingdom son, that I may marry a kingdom daughter.
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